Make it Worse is the advice from one of the writing craft books I read.
The part about ancient tech is making think about parents who are now installing land lines for their kids instead of them having cell phones... insert evil laughter.
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The part about ancient tech is making think about parents who are now installing land lines for their kids instead of them having cell phones... insert evil laughter.
I like it! Thanks for the tip!